The burma trail
As we Trudged into the Burma trail. Everyone started crying but Milly and I. Every step we took there were tears and then screams and then tears again. “Are you all right?” I said to Lydia. Then I said Chloe “Are you all right”. I could hear distant Echo around every side of me. In the corner of my eye jump out Rylee’s dead with a horse on ahhhhhhhh!!. After a few minutes later we all said “Yay”! as we saw the light of the end. Then we walked back to the dormitories and went to sleep.
This is what it felt like doing the Brilliant Burma trail.
Made by jazmin
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